Last Man Standing by Mercy Celeste5/19/2023 ![]() Incredibly, the undercover work isn't compromised. After Grey discovers Paul's identity, all goes on as before. Paul was supposedly a professional, undercover detective, but he acted like a hormonal teenager. The chemistry between the MCs was so sorely lacking even the steamy scenes felt wooden. Grey finds out that Paul is undercover almost immediately, but instead of a slow burn and layers of sexual tension, there is almost immediate verbal masturbation followed by a quick fuck in a bathroom at a football game (because obviously those bathrooms are always empty). ![]() Paul is 30 passing for 17, which I found almost impossible to believe. The relationship between Grey, the teacher, and Paul, the cop/student, was artificial and undeveloped. Undercover cop posing as high school student is hot for teacher! At the very least, I thought I'd get some mild daddy kink and handcuffs.īut no. ![]()
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